ok i know i asked this but i changed some of my story:
“After a long hot day on July 3,1863, the soldiers of the Union Army were worn out from the win of the Battle of Gettysburg. While most relaxed after they won, Gen. Meade stood by the fire thinking about how he and the Union Soldiers in Gettysburg made history.”
is it anygood?? i mean its due Monday(for me) and itsEnglish not history
That’s really good, but you should change “the soldiers of the Union Army were worn out from the (win) of the Battle of Gettysburg” to the “(victory) of the Battle of Gettysburg”.